In my dreams...
In my dreams,
Lying on this concrete ground,
I see darkness all around,
Need u Thee but could not found,
I search u Thee all around.
In my dreams,
I fill this void with many facets,
Reduce myself to empty set,
Standing at a open gate,
I search u Thee in my fate.
In my dreams,
I see something very bright,
A shadow in reach of my sight,
Where should I go-left or right?
I search u Thee whole night.
In my dreams,
I roam around in a cart,
Searching u in world's each part,
Is this the end or the start?
I found u Thee in my heart.
Lying on this concrete ground,
I see darkness all around,
Need u Thee but could not found,
I search u Thee all around.
In my dreams,
I fill this void with many facets,
Reduce myself to empty set,
Standing at a open gate,
I search u Thee in my fate.
In my dreams,
I see something very bright,
A shadow in reach of my sight,
Where should I go-left or right?
I search u Thee whole night.
In my dreams,
I roam around in a cart,
Searching u in world's each part,
Is this the end or the start?
I found u Thee in my heart.
Comments
its really awesome, dnt wry, u vl nvr b left alone....
it is surely d beginning, n u ll find ur frns in ur heart :)
keep smiling
~~~Golden Vulture~~~
@ swati: its just d feelings... poem likhna to mujhe bhi nai aata
@nishi: tu to dil mein basti hai dear...lolz
@manisha,ankit: thnks
@ankit: coz thr r mny ankit n mah life..
But if U see this in ur Night-Dreams, this is really dangerous!! Raat ko sirf sona chahiye... itna sochoge to tensions aur badhenge, isliye sote time sirf sona aur din me jab vella-panthi kar rahe ho, tab ye sochna...
& about the composition, yet another well-played but drawn test match!!