In my dreams...

In my dreams,
Lying on this concrete ground,
I see darkness all around,
Need u Thee but could not found,
I search u Thee all around.

In my dreams,
I fill this void with many facets,
Reduce myself to empty set,
Standing at a open gate,
I search u Thee in my fate.

In my dreams,
I see something very bright,
A shadow in reach of my sight,
Where should I go-left or right?
I search u Thee whole night.

In my dreams,
I roam around in a cart,
Searching u in world's each part,
Is this the end or the start?
I found u Thee in my heart.

Comments

hi sidd read ur heart content my god cud fathom depth of words let the pen flow and views pour luv smita
Anonymous said…
wow yaar awesum..lagta h tujhe bhi nishi ka asar ho gaya...gud 1 yaar..koi hume bhi shikha de ki poem kaise likhi jati h//mei bhi thoda inspire ho rahi hun tum logo se ab
The Wanderer said…
yaar maine socha tha tere sapno main main aati hoon... CHEATING!!! main nahin khel rahi... lolz
Anonymous said…
i read all of these bt find dis one to be amazing .keep it up dear
samster said…
nice use of catholic phrases, gives the feel that the poem has been obtained from some ancient scriptures ... i guees, your dreams travel wayy back in time ... :)
Anonymous said…
hey siddhi, b4 cumin to ur page, i didnt hv any idea dat u too can write such beautiful poems...
its really awesome, dnt wry, u vl nvr b left alone....
it is surely d beginning, n u ll find ur frns in ur heart :)
ankitminglani said…
good one buddy .. bus ek baat samajh nahi aayi ... yeh blog par link list me mera hi naam kyu pura likha hua hai "Ankit Minglani" aur baki sabka nahi :)

keep smiling

~~~Golden Vulture~~~
Siddhi Agrawal said…
@ cj:found in very different sense... in real sense its very difficult

@ swati: its just d feelings... poem likhna to mujhe bhi nai aata

@nishi: tu to dil mein basti hai dear...lolz

@manisha,ankit: thnks

@ankit: coz thr r mny ankit n mah life..
Saumit said…
If this is what U see in ur Day-Dreams, Thats really fabulous!!

But if U see this in ur Night-Dreams, this is really dangerous!! Raat ko sirf sona chahiye... itna sochoge to tensions aur badhenge, isliye sote time sirf sona aur din me jab vella-panthi kar rahe ho, tab ye sochna...

& about the composition, yet another well-played but drawn test match!!
hii sidd ... its ma fav .. poems of urs composition .. i m lovin'it
Siddhi Agrawal said…
@ ravi: thanks u r welcome to my blog! keep visiting
Anonymous said…
Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!
luv khanna said…
siddhi very good write i really like it ,very nice

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